Hal recently lost his wife to cancer and is trying to settle down for retirement by moving to a house in the countryside. His plans are foiled by carpenter bees.

Analog May/June 2026

The progression in this story follows a rising curve of increased unease. At first it is mostly an annoyance to Hal as the bees make holes in his fence posts, but his determination to get rid of them only increases the aggressiveness. It becomes obvious rather quickly that these are not normal bugs, though only Hal and the reader realize that.

The story may be somewhat predictable in where it is going, the enjoyment came from the clear, concise and cozy writing style. I really felt for Hal and his strong will to just want to form a stable retirement for himself alone, after the tragic loss of his wife. I mean this in a positive way, but it is a very uncomplicated story and really just a pleasant read. There is a rather sinister undertone on the conflict between humans and wild nature, which is never fully resolved.

Perfect for a sunny spring afternoon reading on the porch.

Read in Analog May/June 2026
Rating: 3